copy: tighten sovereignty page with direct response principles

- Replace "In a world where..." cliche with punchy declarative sentences
- Split opening paragraph for impact, add bucket brigade transitions
- Add standalone CLOUD Act opener challenging assumptions
- Shorten card descriptions and push benefits deeper (so-what chain)
- Use staccato rhythm for key points (No CLOUD Act. No subpoenas.)
- Tighten CTA with concrete options instead of passive framing
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Your tasks. Your server. Your rules.
</h1>
<p class="mt-6 text-lg text-gray-600 dark:text-gray-300 text-balance">
In a world where governments pressure tech giants, services get cut off overnight, and your data
is subject to foreign laws — Vikunja gives you a way out. Open-source, self-hostable, and made in the EU.
Governments pressure tech giants. Services get cut off overnight. Your data lives under foreign laws
you never agreed to. Vikunja is the way out — open-source, self-hostable, and made in the EU.
</p>
<div class="mt-8 flex flex-col sm:flex-row items-center justify-center gap-4">
<Button href="/docs/installing">Self-Host Vikunja</Button>
@@ -28,16 +28,18 @@ import CloudOrSelfHosted from '../components/partials/CloudOrSelfHosted.astro'
<div class="space-y-8 text-gray-700 dark:text-gray-300">
<p>
The question of who controls your digital tools has never been more urgent.
</p>
<p>
In 2025, the Trump administration
<a href="https://www.cnn.com/2026/01/12/tech/us-eu-tech-regulation-fight-explained" class="underline" target="_blank" rel="noopener">directly linked the removal of EU digital regulations to trade negotiations</a>,
threatening tariffs against countries that impose rules on American tech companies.
US Commerce Secretary Howard Lutnick visited Brussels and tied steel tariff relief to weakening European data protection standards.
</p>
<p>
When the International Criminal Court issued an arrest warrant the US disagreed with, the
Then it got worse. When the International Criminal Court issued an arrest warrant the US disagreed with, the
<a href="https://techcrunch.com/2026/01/27/amid-trump-attacks-and-weaponized-sanctions-europeans-look-to-rely-less-on-us-tech/" class="underline" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Trump administration sanctioned the ICC's chief prosecutor</a>
— and Microsoft promptly cut off his email account.
This was a wake-up call: the software you depend on can be switched off by a foreign government.
One day you have access to your tools. The next, you don't.
</p>
<p>
The European Commission's official for tech sovereignty, Henna Virkkunen,
@@ -79,30 +81,32 @@ import CloudOrSelfHosted from '../components/partials/CloudOrSelfHosted.astro'
<h2 class="text-3xl font-display text-center mb-8">The CLOUD Act: your data isn't safe just because it's in Europe</h2>
<div class="space-y-6 text-gray-700 dark:text-gray-300">
<p>
The US
Here's what most people get wrong about data protection: they think location is enough.
</p>
<p>
It's not. The US
<a href="https://wire.com/en/blog/cloud-act-eu-data-sovereignty" class="underline" target="_blank" rel="noopener">CLOUD Act</a>
(Clarifying Lawful Overseas Use of Data Act) allows American law enforcement to compel
US-based companies to hand over data — regardless of where it is physically stored.
Even if your data sits on a server in Frankfurt or Amsterdam, if the provider is an American company,
the US government can demand access to it.
Your data sits on a server in Frankfurt. The provider is American.
The US government can demand access to it.
</p>
<p>
This directly conflicts with the EU's GDPR, which prohibits transferring personal data
to non-EU authorities without an international agreement.
This directly conflicts with the EU's GDPR.
Organizations using US cloud services face an impossible choice:
comply with the CLOUD Act and violate GDPR, or refuse US demands and face American legal consequences.
</p>
<p>
The
<a href="https://cms-lawnow.com/en/ealerts/2026/02/white-paper-demystifying-the-debate-on-the-us-cloud-act-vs-european-uk-data-sovereignty-in-the-context-of-cloud-services" class="underline" target="_blank" rel="noopener">EU-US Data Privacy Framework</a>
doesn't solve this. It covers commercial data transfers between companies but does not change
doesn't fix this. It covers commercial data transfers between companies but does not change
US lawful-access rules. The CLOUD Act still applies.
</p>
<p class="bg-amber-50 dark:bg-amber-900/20 border border-amber-200 dark:border-amber-800 rounded-lg p-4">
<strong>Data residency is not data sovereignty.</strong>
Storing your data in a European data center owned by a US company does not make it subject
only to European law. True sovereignty requires that the software itself is outside the reach
of foreign jurisdictions — which means using tools that are not controlled by US corporations.
A European data center owned by a US company is still subject to US law. True sovereignty means
the software itself is outside the reach of foreign jurisdictions — tools not controlled by
US corporations.
</p>
</div>
</section>
@@ -112,7 +116,7 @@ import CloudOrSelfHosted from '../components/partials/CloudOrSelfHosted.astro'
<h2 class="text-3xl font-display text-center mb-8">Europe is already acting</h2>
<div class="max-w-(--breakpoint-md) mx-auto space-y-6 text-gray-700 dark:text-gray-300">
<p>
This isn't theoretical. Governments and institutions across Europe are actively
This shift is already underway. Governments and institutions across Europe are
replacing US-controlled tools:
</p>
<ul class="space-y-4 list-none">
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<span>
<strong>The International Criminal Court</strong> in The Hague
<a href="https://www.theregister.com/2025/12/22/europe_gets_serious_about_cutting/" class="underline" target="_blank" rel="noopener">replaced Microsoft Office</a>
with OpenDesk, an open-source suite — after the chief prosecutor's email
with OpenDesk after the chief prosecutor's email
was shut off following US sanctions.
</span>
</li>
@@ -176,9 +180,8 @@ import CloudOrSelfHosted from '../components/partials/CloudOrSelfHosted.astro'
Self-hosted on your infrastructure
</h3>
<p class="text-gray-600 dark:text-gray-300">
Run Vikunja on your own server, your own hardware, in your own jurisdiction.
No third-party cloud provider can access your data, and no foreign government can compel its disclosure.
You control the infrastructure, the backups, and the access.
Your server, your hardware, your jurisdiction. No cloud provider sits between you
and your data. No foreign government can compel disclosure or flip a switch and cut you off.
</p>
</div>
<div class="p-6 border border-gray-200 dark:border-gray-700 rounded-xl">
@@ -189,10 +192,10 @@ import CloudOrSelfHosted from '../components/partials/CloudOrSelfHosted.astro'
Fully open-source (AGPLv3)
</h3>
<p class="text-gray-600 dark:text-gray-300">
Every line of Vikunja's code is
Every line of code is
<a href="https://code.vikunja.io" class="underline" target="_blank" rel="noopener">publicly available</a>.
You can audit it, modify it, and verify that it does exactly what it claims.
No hidden telemetry, no backdoors, no vendor lock-in. If Vikunja ever disappeared,
Audit it. Modify it. Verify it does exactly what it claims.
No hidden telemetry, no backdoors. If Vikunja disappeared tomorrow,
the code would still be yours.
</p>
</div>
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Made and hosted in the EU
</h3>
<p class="text-gray-600 dark:text-gray-300">
Vikunja is developed and maintained in Europe.
Developed and maintained in Europe.
<a href="https://vikunja.cloud/?utm_source=io&utm_medium=io&utm_campaign=sovereignty" class="underline" rel="noopener">Vikunja Cloud</a>
is hosted on EU infrastructure, subject only to European law.
No CLOUD Act, no foreign subpoenas, no "kill switch" that a non-EU government can pull.
runs on EU infrastructure, subject only to European law.
No CLOUD Act. No foreign subpoenas. No kill switch a non-EU government can pull.
</p>
</div>
<div class="p-6 border border-gray-200 dark:border-gray-700 rounded-xl">
@@ -218,9 +221,9 @@ import CloudOrSelfHosted from '../components/partials/CloudOrSelfHosted.astro'
No vendor lock-in
</h3>
<p class="text-gray-600 dark:text-gray-300">
Your data is stored in standard formats. Import from Todoist, Trello, or Microsoft To-Do.
Export whenever you want. Vikunja supports CalDAV for interoperability with other tools.
You're never trapped.
Standard data formats. Import from Todoist, Trello, or Microsoft To-Do.
Export whenever you want. CalDAV support for interoperability.
Sovereignty means you can leave, too. You're never trapped.
</p>
</div>
<div class="p-6 border border-gray-200 dark:border-gray-700 rounded-xl">
@@ -231,9 +234,9 @@ import CloudOrSelfHosted from '../components/partials/CloudOrSelfHosted.astro'
Privacy by design
</h3>
<p class="text-gray-600 dark:text-gray-300">
Vikunja was built from the ground up with privacy as a core principle. No tracking,
no analytics, no selling your data. When you self-host, not even the Vikunja team
has access to your information.
No tracking. No analytics. No selling your data. When you self-host, not even
the Vikunja team can access your information. Privacy isn't a feature we added —
it's how we built the thing.
</p>
</div>
<div class="p-6 border border-gray-200 dark:border-gray-700 rounded-xl">
@@ -244,9 +247,9 @@ import CloudOrSelfHosted from '../components/partials/CloudOrSelfHosted.astro'
Bootstrapped, not VC-funded
</h3>
<p class="text-gray-600 dark:text-gray-300">
Vikunja is completely bootstrapped. There are no venture capital investors pushing for
growth-at-all-costs, no pressure to monetize your data, and no risk of being acquired
by a company whose interests don't align with yours.
No venture capital. No pressure to monetize your data. No risk of being acquired
by a company whose interests don't align with yours. Vikunja answers to its users,
not to investors.
</p>
</div>
</div>
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<section class="py-20 text-center">
<h2 class="text-3xl font-display mb-4">Take back control</h2>
<p class="text-lg text-gray-600 dark:text-gray-300 mb-12 max-w-(--breakpoint-sm) mx-auto text-balance">
Whether you self-host or use Vikunja Cloud, your task management stays under your control
— not in the hands of foreign governments or Big Tech shareholders.
Self-host on your own infrastructure, or use Vikunja Cloud on EU servers under EU law.
Either way, your task management answers to you — not to foreign governments or Big Tech shareholders.
</p>
<CloudOrSelfHosted/>
</section>